Hello, I’m Atarumaster88, an Archivist on Star Wars Fanon. If you’re not familiar with that position, it means that I know a few things about fan fiction and I help out by promoting good fanfics on this wiki. Today I’m going to discuss the Summer 2010 Short Story Contest and provide some thoughts on the works that have been submitted for nomination.
First, though, I’d like to take a minute and compare the first contest to the current one.
By the numbers:
The first contest had:
- 25 separate nominations
- 12 unique stories
- 6 categories
- 9 authors
The second contest currently has:
- 38 separate nominations
- 18 unique stories
- 8 categories
- 13 authors
That’s a pretty sizable increase in numbers, so congratulations to the SWF community on their increased participation and good luck to all the participants.
Special congratulations to Darth Wylind and Unit8311 for making return appearances, nominating stories in both the first and second contests. Also a special note to Grand Admiral Harmon and Goodwood for submitting multiple stories in this contest. It takes a lot of work to write one short story, much less two or more.
Now, for the breakdown of those stories, going in order of the nominations page:
Star Wars: The Tragedy by Brandon Rhea. I’ve already reviewed this work before, so I’ll summarize briefly. The Tragedy tells the story of how Darth Sidious takes over as head Sith of the Alternative Star Wars Saga – though, in the Alternative Saga, he’s only known as the “Dark Lord,” with the author keeping him otherwise nameless. It’s set in 41 BBY and it’s actually pretty short for a Brandon Rhea work. I’d say the strengths of this work are its deep characterization and well-constructed plot twists. On the downside, it’s a bit melodramatic at places, especially the dialogue, and is a bit unorthodox in terms of portrayal of Sith Lords. Still, overall, Brandon Rhea’s first published short story is a good work and I give it a thumbs up. For my full review, see here.
Breakfast in Bedlam by Trak Nar. This story tells about the tale of deranged criminal Pepan Manja and some of the other inmates at the Bedlam Correctiona Facility and is set in 26 ABY. It’s a fast-moving tale of intrigue, murder, and malice, with a lot of plot twists. The intensity of the plot and wide variety of characters combined with some lighter moments work well to tell a good story, though it suffers from tense issues and some rushed scenes, as well as a bit of unnecessary social commentary. That said, I enjoyed Breakfast in Bedlam and it gets a thumbs up from me also.
The Real Empire by Station7. I can’t say that I’ve done more than skim this one. The parts of it I did understand I didn’t enjoy, so I’ll leave it at that and see if MPK has more detailed commentary to make. I’m pretty sure the author isn’t a native English-speaker, which probably contributes to that.
Star Wars: Death and Life by Goodwood. I’ve also reviewed this one, which tells the story of Laera Reyolé, a Republic Marine who is brought back by none other than Darth Revan after said Marine fails at playing hot potato with a Mandalorian grenade. The protagonist then has to deal with all the various emotional complications that come from alive after being dead for awhile. Strengths are that Goodwood does an excellent job with his prose, vocabulary, and description and Laera is a well-characterized protagonist. On the downside, the conflict is definitely muted and it seems to defy categorization in terms of genre. Thumbs up for this one, and my full review is here.
Coruscant’s Finest by Wylind. This story tells about Coruscant detective Kendra Mali and it fits nicely into the hardboiled detective story. Definitely a darker tale than the others in terms of writing as Kendra pursues a murderer whose identity I won’t spoil. On the upside, the plot doesn’t disappoint and it makes a pretty exciting mystery. More negatively, the author seems to rush scenes and the characterization is a bit shallow. I’ll give it a thumb halfway up.
Saber Battalion by Goodwood. This is an action story set during the Jedi Civil War, featuring Laera Reyolé again, this time leading a Republic Marine assault on the Sith world of Iridonia. Fans of the military-fic genre won’t be too disappointed, as there’s plenty of action, marine jargon, and other military adages. However, those with more literary leanings will be disappointed to find that it leans toward being a pure action story, with the potential for emotional conflict inherent in the story underdeveloped and a weak ending battle lacking in personality. I give this battalion a saber—I mean thumb—up despite these flaws.
Phantoms of the Past by Grand Admiral Harmon. It’s a story that tells of a conflict between the Jedi and Sith using familiar characters like Yoda and Anakin Skywalker, but in quite different incarnations. I did not finish this story, as it simply moves too fast for deep characterization, and though the dialogue is mostly serviceable, it’s not enough to really explain the obviously complex story the author is trying to tell.
Freedom by Sakaros. A short but gripping tale about a slave fighting a krayt dragon of all things in an arena to earn freedom for him and his lover. The author does a good job with his description of the fight and the characterization is detailed and executed well. On the downside, the description is minimal, though it works for the purposes of the story. Thumbs up.
Fail-Safe by Nightmare975. This story tells about a rogue general in the Republic starting a war with another planet against orders, as well as the Republic attempts to forestall a full-scale conflict. The plot is well-thought out and solid, on the plus side. Less positively, it doesn’t flow, the dialogue could use work, and I felt that a story of this magnitude deserved a longer and slower effort than something so short.
Vanguard of the Republic by Jedi Master 76. JM76 tells a war story set in the KotOR era centered on a hapless Rookie whose real name is Jhosua but nobody ever remembers that. Somehow, Jhosua managed to blunder his way into the Republic Army and a raging battle despite being a mostly terrible soldier. Okay, I’m being a bit harsh, but he’s no Sergeant York, much less Chuck Norris. You’ll have to read it to find out if he survives encounters with angry Sith, poor tactical decisions, and worse of all, crazy snake people. It’s well-written, displaying JM’s usual broad range of characterization while mixing in the grit of a war story. The critic in me reminds us all that the character isn’t quite as memorable and the story not as gripping as JM’s other, longer works. I’ve reviewed this story before and you can read it all here. Thumbs up.
First Impressions by Atarumaster88. Hey, that’s me. This story is set shortly before AOTC and focuses on Selusda Kraen, the protagonist of the Force Exile Series, as a young Jedi Padawan. It’s a lighter read compared to my other works, but since reviewing it would be sort of pretentious, I’ll point you to some other words by other people since I don’t have any full reviews of this one.
Cloak and Datapad by Atarumaster88. This story revolves around a Wraith Squadron mission and how it intertwines with a visit by Force Exile characters Sarth and Cassi Kraen on Hosk Station. It’s set in 10 ABY and as for reviews, I’ll let Solus do that in her own blunt manner.
Sith Civil War: Campaign Clone Extermination by Grand Admiral Harmon. This is another Jedi versus Sith conflict that tries to fit an epic war into all too few pages. More or less the same quality as the other story by this author, with serviceable dialogue but a rushed plot, and a lack of character development or dialogue.
Hard Code by Atarumaster88. A team of elite commandos combines with some of the Force Exile prima donnas on a risky infiltration mission. But when plans go awry, it’s up Dex Naresco, a soldier with a hidden vendetta, to pull them through. Will Dex be able to pull off his mission and fulfill his own wishes? You’ll have to read it to find out. No reviews available.
Deception on R’alla by Atarumaster88. The Kraen family, the central characters of Force Exile, are enjoying a happy vacation on R’alla when they start finding signs that there is more to the planet than meets the eye. The subsequent adventure features guest star Fiolla of Lorrd from the Han Solo Trilogy. No reviews available.
Compensation by Unit8311. This story tells the tale of a hapless Imperial inspector Varris Tralen, who’s basically a bureaucratic problem-solver. He gets sent into a totally ridiculous situation and forced to solve all kinds of moronic problems invented by overdone regulations. This story tries to be funny, relying on slapstick humor, snide comments, and gags to earn laughs. It’s pretty creative, and technically speaking, well done but I wasn’t really amused. I’ll give this one a thumb halfway up.
Jedi’s Digest by Gnost-Dural and Senatorial Aide Van Ishok. Best classified as a comedy of errors, this short story tells of some unfortunate Jedi trying to save his Master from the Killiks. I skimmed this one, because I’m not a huge comedy fan and this one was too rushed for me to follow the plot. It’s unorthodox, but in my humble opinion still needs work.
Through Her Eyes by Atarumaster88. This is a romance that focuses on Rhiannon Kraen, the daughter of Force Exile protagonist Selusda Kraen. You won’t find much in the way of action here, just love and a bit of emotional conflict on the side. Again, no reviews available.
As you can see, there’s plenty to read, and lot of varied offerings. Some of SWF’s best and most famous authors, including Brandon Rhea (Best Author 2008) and Jedi Master 76 (Best Author 2010), are taking part in this contest, but there’s lots of other content to explore as well. So, grab a chair, a cold drink, and sink into some of the short stories available in the contest. What better way to spend the hot, lazy days of summer, right?
Oh, and don’t forget to vote on and comment about your favorites. As for me, I’ll be looking for more candidates for featured work to nominate on the main page for month at a time. If you see something you think worthy of that award, just create an entry on the FWN page!
This is Atarumaster88 signing off and hoping you’ll find something to suit your fancy at the 2010 short story contest. Voting lasts until July 15th, so get reading.
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